Dragon's Wrath

Your story is quite great, but it's too fast paced and too many "benefits" of an mc? So far so good the story is great, the mysteries sorroundings the story in the first and second chapters is also good, story line can still be improved and such.It has potential.

Best Novel I had read. You all should read it if you like this type of novel. Love IT                                                               

The pacing is steady, allowing the tension to build naturally. The world feels familiar yet frightening, which enhances the story’s impact. It's a thought-provoking and engaging read for anyone who enjoys dystopian thrillers with a scientific twist.

This 1st episode of this work is sooo cool! It starts with a normal guy, Hiroki, in a messed up world. Then a mysterious book and a big boom change everything! Hiroki wakes up in a strange place with no memory.  I gotta know what happened next!

You'll never shine if you don't glow

EIRA POV:

When I got there I could see a small area within the forest that has been beaten to a pulp. I could see patches of grass that had been burnt and slashes across the tree where the wind blades went through their prey.

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